Test Screening

I had a small test screening a few weeks back. Amazing how quick you discover what works and what does not. All in a matter of seconds. A gag flashes across the screen.... no laughter. Too subtle. Write in notes to rework gag or delete shot all together. All in all it was a great. It let me know I need to retool some of the dialogue between the characters and ad in a shot. From there I will try another screening and hope my ideas come across the way I intend them.

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